LoneSaiyan115's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Forest Temple Music]

..........AWESOME

you sir took my favorite temple theme in the game and made it immensely badass... keep these OoT metal tunes coming dude, and keep it metal

[The Jounrey Home [dk84]]

I Like...

But I have heard a similar riff from Lashmush in his song Phoenix. But regardless its still a good song. Keep it metal dude

deathkllr84 responds:

I didn't see any similarities in our songs, but any string skipping riffs or 8-5-0 chord progressions are going to sound like AILD or any other metalcore band because thats what they use.

\m/

[TDT - Wizard and Glass]

mixing needs some work but besides that good

The drums didnt have enough bass to them, could barely hear the bass drum. ?You might just need some new samples for the kit but thats up to you. But what i was impressed by was the vocals. The singer has some good pipes on him. Just needs to work on his high range me thinks

Regardless keep it metal guys \m/

[The Horizon.]

What tootsie said

Seriously if your girlfriend is up for it. Let her sing man, the girl has some major skills and it creates a great contrast for the screaming vocals.

Keep it metal guys!!!!

RyanRoxx666 responds:

Thanks very much for the feedback man.

She seems to be up for it, so she'll probably become a full time member seeing as people seem to think she was a good addition.

Thanks bro.

- Ryan.

[Epicity]

Badass good sir

You have once again made a truly great piece of music. I can say I'm not a fan of Dragon Force and don't really like the fact that they record half speed, mainly because they are making money for being fake. But this was written and planned out masterfully. You made the song for the sake of creating something awesome and not for cash (Or maybe not O_o) haha jk. Anyways give it sometime and you wont need to play this song half speed. Keep it metal bro

Xenogenocide responds:

Haha, I'm no fan of Dragonforce either. You are exactly right though, I "made the song for the sake of creating something awesome and not for cash". Although I would love to make money out of it, it would be so very hypocritical of me to do so. (You should know what I mean by that!). I do hope to eventually become a much better player, but I don't have a lot of time on my hands to practice since most of it is taken up by work/gym/family/friends, etc.

My promise to you is this though - I will continue doing what I do, and that is make music for fun!

[Kindred Teaser]

Ballsy... I like it

Nice and heavy dude... Im still not a fan of that snare tone... the bass sound is great tho. And the riffs are simple but make you want to head bang... some harmonics for the riff from 0:23 till then end would sound bad ass too. Keep it metal bro

AttackTh3Radical responds:

I really don't know how to change the snare tone, but it's just a teaser, i'll fuck with it some more in the future. Thanks for the review man.

[Phoenix (For Jennifer)]

like this one more

I feel with the intro and the way its laid out in, this version is a lot more of a complete song then the new version. I like your guitar tones in this version more as well. They seem to compliment drum tones a lot better then your current guitar tones..

Just my opinion tho.. regardless kick ass song haha keep it metal dude

[Legion - Studio Stupidity 01]

O_o......

I am not sure what is going on.... were any drugs involved? hahaha

[B7 - Power Rangers Ultimate]

very nice haha

I like the introduction... It was well spoken... I do like the song haha,

Burn7 responds:

...Wait you mean you actually chose to listen to this shit in your spare time? Wow, thanks! :D

[Fight.Back]

Pretty nice

Ok heres some quick constructive things to take to heart that I noticed.... mostly about the drums, since I'm a drummer myself.

It seemed to me for a lot of the fills, you really just stuck to the snare, to me it was a bit repetitive.. especially for the fill around 1:00 to 1:06, and 2:07 to 2:14 , just do some tom rolls instead of snare rolls.

This could be the same for just some of the drum riffs in general, If the guitar riffs remain the same for a long period of time like around 3:00 til the end... me as a drummer likes to improvise and change things up to make the song more interesting to the listener. Through some random fills in there or change the drum beat a bit, throw in some double bass for the hell of it haha.

Thats my 2 cents.. good song dude, keep it metal

AttackTh3Radical responds:

Best criticism i've read yet.

I'm not a drummer, but I wrote the whole drum track in MIDI using Addictive Drums. I'm listening to the song right now, and I didn't realize how much I was actually using the snare. It does sound like i'm overusing it for fills. I'm pretty proud that I wrote that drum track, but it could always use some improving. The more and more I write, the better and more complex they get. So, thank you very much for the feedback. I really do appreciate it.